2014 提升職場寫作力競賽－英文簡歷自傳寫作（求職組）首獎

作品名稱：李芝融申請環境相關
獎勵：獎狀一紙、獎金6,000元
得獎人：李芝融／原子科學院學士班大四

評語：
This is good overall, though it would be helpful to know what the job is; we are only told that it is “environment-related”. The passion for the subject and the job is clear, and believable. In the CV, “Foreign Literature” is confusing, especially since it is not mentioned in the autobiography. It would be better to use bold only for the main headings and to separate the dates from the rest of the material, to make it more readable.
　　　　　　——卓江（本校師資培訓中心教授）
　　　　　　——柯安娜（本校外國語文學系教授）
　　　　　　——徐憶萍（本校師資培訓中心副教授）
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2014/04/24

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